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Post by Psjunkie » Thu May 10, 2018 1:20 pm

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Post by PietFrancke » Thu May 10, 2018 4:33 pm

could be called defense also... perhaps 3 on 1 for a title (not that a title matters..). I like the colors. Use the mixer brush tool to edit some of the distraction in the area between the ball handlers arm and body. Perhaps fade out the back boy's face to match the girl's to help keep the eye on the ball battle.

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Post by Psjunkie » Thu May 10, 2018 4:58 pm

Thanks for your observations Piet....I always struggle with titles.

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Post by St3v3M » Sat Jun 16, 2018 9:56 pm

Psjunkie wrote:
Thu May 10, 2018 1:20 pm
all comment absorbed.....
I like it and I don't, and the more I look at it I realize it's because his face looks normal when all the rest have a texture.

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