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Re: Experimentations

Post by minniev » Fri Feb 08, 2019 7:07 pm

davechinn wrote:
Fri Feb 08, 2019 3:42 pm
A redo without the fence and frame. Blur is not so heavy, but I added another textured layer and cropped some, so its slightly different from the first?
Oh gee, I like this one a lot! The physical pose of the horse has so much more impact without the fence. With the fence there, it took more attention than it should've, I think in retrospect. This is great. Print it!
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Post by PietFrancke » Fri Feb 08, 2019 9:48 pm

yepper, I like this a lot better. Simple, clean - if you want to add another element or two fading into the distance you can. Like Frank said about the back, but I love your textures and mood and this is very nice in B/W as you have it. Has a very nice sketchy feel to it.

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Post by davechinn » Sat Feb 09, 2019 12:09 pm

Psjunkie wrote:
Fri Feb 08, 2019 4:11 pm
Really like this a whole lot better Dave, but you are right it is a different photo now..everything you've done here looks good..if I had a nitpik it would be wanting to see a bit more structure of the hind legs, maybe a bit of darkness or something to alleviate the prosthetic look.....

Frank the nitpik is spot on. I thought the same, but ignored my thoughts. Appreciate the feedback.
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