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A session with Kaitlin

Postby Onslow » Tue Mar 31, 2015 12:24 pm

These are some test images from a recent shoot with Kaitlin...

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Re: A session with Kaitlin

Postby TomCofer » Tue Mar 31, 2015 10:42 pm

I really like these a lot overall John.
Again, she is a very beautiful young lady and I think you did a great job of showing it. Switching between 100% and 50% view in my browser let me see the photos as a whole and the details.

Looking at these makes me wonder if Bobby's suggestion of raising the fill up a bit might have helped reduced the highlights in the clothing and lower body. I'm using an uncalibrated screen, but it appears that there are some hot spots in her clothing, shoulder and hair that are slightly distracting. Then again, I'm looking at them as portraits and I don't know anything about fashion photography. In the last one, the shadow on her index finger is a bit distracting to me, almost making it look dirty or bruised at first glance.
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