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Biker babe shoot - Christina this last weekend

Postby Coral » Tue May 05, 2015 10:06 pm

This was really fun - we used two bikes. One belongs to my husband and the other one to a friend. I've shot with Christina twice before and I'm pretty sure that is the only time she has modeled.
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Postby Coral » Tue May 05, 2015 10:08 pm

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Re: Biker babe shoot - Christina this last weekend

Postby TomCofer » Tue May 05, 2015 11:49 pm

Very nice work Coral! I like 'em.
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Re: Biker babe shoot - Christina this last weekend

Postby Coral » Wed May 06, 2015 2:07 pm

Thank you, Tom.

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Re: Biker babe shoot - Christina this last weekend

Postby Bobby Deal » Thu May 07, 2015 3:24 am

These are fun Coral, I do think I would have switched her legs in #1 though. By raising the back leg it would have allowed her to present a much more balanced line that would be a lot more flattering across pelvis and buttocks. This is one of those times when I would break the rule of weight on the back foot

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Re: Biker babe shoot - Christina this last weekend

Postby Bob's Photography » Thu May 07, 2015 10:02 pm

Oh to be young again..... Coral, I like the second shot the most, but I think the background from the green up could be subdued, tone down the contrast and maybe even the color, it conflicts with the girl and the bike and that's what "I" want to see.

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Re: Biker babe shoot - Christina this last weekend

Postby Coral » Tue May 12, 2015 4:14 pm

Thanks so much Bobby and Bob.


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