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Sitting Ashore

Postby Psjunkie » Sun Sep 03, 2017 9:40 pm

Critique or Opinions welcome....
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Re: Sitting Ashore

Postby LindaShorey » Sun Sep 03, 2017 9:57 pm

I'm reluctant to say, but I'm just not engaged. I think it's because I can't see their expressions and I don't have a sense of what they are doing. I'll come back again later for another look-see.
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Re: Sitting Ashore

Postby Ernst-Ulrich Schafer » Mon Sep 04, 2017 2:09 am

A moment for them to remember when they are older. I'd back off the contrast just abit, alittle to hot in areas.
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Re: Sitting Ashore

Postby Psjunkie » Mon Sep 04, 2017 11:40 am

LindaShorey wrote:I'm reluctant to say, but I'm just not engaged.
Don't be Linda honest feedback is what I look for.....

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Re: Sitting Ashore

Postby Psjunkie » Mon Sep 04, 2017 11:41 am

Ernst-Ulrich Schafer wrote:I'd back off the contrast just a bit, a little to hot in areas.
Point taken Ernst, thank you for the observation...

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Re: Sitting Ashore

Postby rmalarz » Mon Sep 04, 2017 7:03 pm

I'm with Ernst on this one. It's a nice photograph otherwise.
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Re: Sitting Ashore

Postby Psjunkie » Mon Sep 04, 2017 9:13 pm

Thanks Bob, always good to have your comment....

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Re: Sitting Ashore

Postby St3v3M » Thu Sep 14, 2017 5:06 am

Psjunkie wrote:Critique or Opinions welcome....

It's the intimate moments that we remember the most. Thank you for sharing this with us! S-
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Re: Sitting Ashore

Postby Psjunkie » Thu Sep 14, 2017 11:08 am

Thanks for comment Steve...


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