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Post by Psjunkie » Wed Oct 17, 2018 1:07 am

another beach shot...
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Post by PietFrancke » Wed Oct 17, 2018 2:32 am

LOL - will be gone for a week or so, so likely won't see your beach shot when you get around to posting it! LOL

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Post by Psjunkie » Wed Oct 17, 2018 2:35 am

doing a test..rare to get comment so thought I'd see if anyone noticed....

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Post by PietFrancke » Wed Oct 17, 2018 2:40 am

Psjunkie wrote:
Wed Oct 17, 2018 2:35 am
doing a test..rare to get comment so thought I'd see if anyone noticed....
Ha! that's what they always say... why are you unsure? I think this is an awesome shot. Here is my crit, the contrast on the boys mouth/chin/nose is a little too harsh, soften that a little so that he still looks young. I love this shot and your treatment of it! It is awesome, awesome, awesome!!

edit - and by the way, good use of texture in the sky/blurred areas.

second edit - unsure... now I understand, she is unsure about moving into the depths - not that Frank is unsure that this is a great shot!!! LOL - I love the way he looks at her, and I love the way her right hand's fingers are stretched out.

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Post by Psjunkie » Wed Oct 17, 2018 2:45 am

thank you Piet and I concur with your assessment......the title of the Image is "Unsure"...I have a tough time with titles...the little one seems a touch unsure, don't you think????

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Post by PietFrancke » Wed Oct 17, 2018 2:47 am

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Wed Oct 17, 2018 2:45 am
thank you Piet and I concur with your assessment......the title of the Image is "Unsure"...I have a tough time with titles...the little one seems a touch unsure, don't you think????
yes, my second edit crossed yours - the title is perfect.

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Post by davechinn » Wed Oct 17, 2018 8:48 am

A fantastic image Frank !!! The bokeh is just right which puts more focus on your lovely subjects. It looks as thou you have added a texture to the sky and its not overbearing. Just subtle enough to know that its there. I don't have any suggestions for improvement, altho Piet may be onto something, but I like it as is and the title as well. I struggle with titles too, so I know your thoughts with that issue.
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Post by Psjunkie » Wed Oct 17, 2018 12:56 pm

Thank you very much Dave...actually there is a couple of textures over the whole image, what's caused the issue with his face Piet mentions...I have reworked his face area and her legs and am pleased with the result..I appreciated your comments...

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Post by minniev » Thu Oct 18, 2018 12:24 pm

I am a bit off the grid so just seeing this. I agree with Piets thoughts about the boys mouth and chin. Mitigating the harshness there will match the tender mood of the moment better.
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Post by Psjunkie » Thu Oct 18, 2018 12:56 pm

thank you for comment minniev, see my previous post...will be looking for more Colorado pics

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