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Post by Psjunkie » Wed Jun 20, 2018 9:50 pm

all comment welcomed....
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Post by Matt Quinn » Thu Jun 21, 2018 1:43 am

I like the idea, Frank, but the older fellow seems to take up too much room in the third photo. And the light falling on the faces if different and distracting. A cool backyard picnic reflected in the sunglasses. Matt
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Post by minniev » Thu Jun 21, 2018 2:17 pm

Psjunkie wrote:
Wed Jun 20, 2018 9:50 pm
all comment welcomed....
I think these handsome fellows are maybe better apart than together, due to the lighting. There is a little selection issue on the foreground guy around the chin area I think, though who am I to even try to talk about selections...

Self portrait maybe?
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Post by Psjunkie » Thu Jun 21, 2018 2:22 pm

Thank you both very much for comment...it is thoroughly absorbed

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Post by St3v3M » Tue Jul 03, 2018 2:45 am

Matt Quinn wrote:
Thu Jun 21, 2018 1:43 am
I like the idea, Frank, but the older fellow seems to take up too much room in the third photo. And the light falling on the faces if different and distracting. A cool backyard picnic reflected in the sunglasses. Matt
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Post by Psjunkie » Tue Jul 03, 2018 11:34 am

understood, thanks

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