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Looked up

Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2018 2:54 am
by Psjunkie
from making Christmas cookies...I know of a couple of things still not to my liking in this image and welcome any comment about it you may have.

Most all my images are what I refer to as grab-n-go shots so I have an awful lot of less than stellar photos cause I’m to anal to let the camera do any of the thinking and shoot in manual..scenes often change quicker than my mind and fingers can adapt....I challenge myself every so often to make a silk purse out of a sow’s ear since I have many ears to choose from….did I at least get lemonade?

Re: Looked up

Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2018 1:05 pm
by PietFrancke
please take these thoughts with a big grain of sand... too centered, perhaps give her some space to camera right. There is a slight green tint to her hair that you need to kill (but I don't trust my color vision or monitor - and on second thought, it kind of works). This would be a nice image to apply a texture to very lightly. Perhaps darken the neck a little more

The eyes -- killer eyes!!! Love the color of them. The grin, the contact - this is a very special image Frank.

Re: Looked up

Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2018 1:19 pm
by Psjunkie
PietFrancke wrote:
Wed Jun 06, 2018 1:05 pm
please take these thoughts with a big grain of sand... too centered, perhaps give her some space to camera right. There is a slight green tint to her hair that you need to kill (but I don't trust my color vision or monitor - and on second thought, it kind of works). This would be a nice image to apply a texture to very lightly. Perhaps darken the neck a little more

The eyes -- killer eyes!!! Love the color of them. The grin, the contact - this is a very special image Frank.
Thanks for your observations Piet....and the load of sand

Re: Looked up

Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2018 2:33 pm
by minniev
You did well plucking her out of the group, and making something this pleasing from a group shot. Adjust the color just a bit to fight off a green tinge that's probably from mixed lighting? Then a keeper!

Re: Looked up

Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2018 3:37 pm
by Psjunkie
minniev wrote:
Wed Jun 06, 2018 2:33 pm
Adjust the color just a bit to fight off a green tinge
along with a couple of other things....thank you for comment.

Re: Looked up

Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2018 4:10 am
by St3v3M
Psjunkie wrote:
Wed Jun 06, 2018 2:54 am
from making Christmas cookies...I know of a couple of things still not to my liking in this image and welcome any comment about it you may have.

Most all my images are what I refer to as grab-n-go shots so I have an awful lot of less than stellar photos cause I’m to anal to let the camera do any of the thinking and shoot in manual..scenes often change quicker than my mind and fingers can adapt....I challenge myself every so often to make a silk purse out of a sow’s ear since I have many ears to choose from….did I at least get lemonade?
Move the image up a little showing the top of her hear and you're almost there! S-

Re: Looked up

Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2018 4:22 am
by Psjunkie
I appreciate you taking time to comment