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Post by Psjunkie » Wed Sep 06, 2017 12:06 pm

Yes I struggle with titles...all comments appreciated, especially those suggesting improvement.....
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Post by davechinn » Wed Sep 06, 2017 12:14 pm

A lovely intimate moment Frank !!! No suggestions as the image speaks for itself.
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Post by Matt Quinn » Wed Sep 06, 2017 5:50 pm

Frank. A sad moment in a young life. Wonderful sharpness on the lashes; subtle leading lines in the whips of hair toward the lashes. The rest of the face looks washed out on my screen. The right shoulder looks muddy and the slight crease of the armpit distracts me. Picky-picky on my part. The image, though, is a long-term keeper. Well done. Matt
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Post by Psjunkie » Wed Sep 06, 2017 10:22 pm

Mr. Chinn....thank you..

Pick me apart Matt, it's what I look for.....The shoulder has caught the vignette...not sure what you are seeing in the face...thank you very much for comment..
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Post by Matt Quinn » Wed Sep 06, 2017 10:29 pm

Psjunkie wrote:Mr. Chinn....thank you..

Pick me apart Matt, it's what I look for.....The shoulder has caught the vignette...not sure what you are seeing in the face...thank you very much for comment..


Curious, on my MBA, the face looks fine. On my iMac, it's washed out. A bit disarming since I am not tech literate and my kids are hundreds of miles away. Oh, well, I'll live with it. Matt
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Post by St3v3M » Sun Sep 17, 2017 11:05 pm

Psjunkie wrote:Yes I struggle with titles...all comments appreciated, especially those suggesting improvement.....

I would offer that you consider a square crop coming in from the left, but otherwise, I love it. So sad, but so beautiful! S-
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