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- Psjunkie
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No Ice Crean
Yes I struggle with titles...all comments appreciated, especially those suggesting improvement.....
- Matt Quinn
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Frank. A sad moment in a young life. Wonderful sharpness on the lashes; subtle leading lines in the whips of hair toward the lashes. The rest of the face looks washed out on my screen. The right shoulder looks muddy and the slight crease of the armpit distracts me. Picky-picky on my part. The image, though, is a long-term keeper. Well done. Matt
Matt Quinn
"One should really use the camera as though tomorrow you'd be stricken blind." Dorothea Lange
"One should really use the camera as though tomorrow you'd be stricken blind." Dorothea Lange
- Psjunkie
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Mr. Chinn....thank you..
Pick me apart Matt, it's what I look for.....The shoulder has caught the vignette...not sure what you are seeing in the face...thank you very much for comment..
Pick me apart Matt, it's what I look for.....The shoulder has caught the vignette...not sure what you are seeing in the face...thank you very much for comment..
- Matt Quinn
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Psjunkie wrote:Mr. Chinn....thank you..
Pick me apart Matt, it's what I look for.....The shoulder has caught the vignette...not sure what you are seeing in the face...thank you very much for comment..
Curious, on my MBA, the face looks fine. On my iMac, it's washed out. A bit disarming since I am not tech literate and my kids are hundreds of miles away. Oh, well, I'll live with it. Matt
Matt Quinn
"One should really use the camera as though tomorrow you'd be stricken blind." Dorothea Lange
"One should really use the camera as though tomorrow you'd be stricken blind." Dorothea Lange
- St3v3M
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Psjunkie wrote:Yes I struggle with titles...all comments appreciated, especially those suggesting improvement.....
I would offer that you consider a square crop coming in from the left, but otherwise, I love it. So sad, but so beautiful! S-
"Take photographs, leave footprints, steal hearts"
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