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Re: Sparrow

Post by LAH » Wed Mar 21, 2018 2:34 pm

Looks great

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Post by minniev » Sun Mar 25, 2018 9:52 pm

LAH wrote:
Wed Mar 21, 2018 2:34 pm
Looks great
Thank you (and welcome back to pM, don't stay away so long!)
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Post by St3v3M » Mon Apr 02, 2018 6:00 am

Wow, that's beautiful! Well done! S-
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Post by PietFrancke » Mon Apr 02, 2018 1:03 pm

cool shot, I feel them move. I agree about the crop - don't do it, the wires and different color tiles add atmosphere and sense of environment. It works.

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Post by minniev » Mon Apr 02, 2018 8:20 pm

Psjunkie wrote:
Mon Mar 19, 2018 10:49 pm
minniev wrote:
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Mon Mar 19, 2018 9:24 pm
Good job...reminds me of some of don olea's work.....
AW now Frank, I'm not in Don's league!

Do you think I need to crop up from the bottom?
No..
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Post by minniev » Mon Apr 02, 2018 8:21 pm

Charles Haacker wrote:
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Thanks Chuck, I'll ask you like I did Frank, should I crop up from the bottom?
No. I bet you want to hide the cables but I think they are part of the show and not at all distracting. My eye goes to the performers and the light. I never noticed the bottom until you mentioned it.
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Post by minniev » Mon Apr 02, 2018 8:21 pm

davechinn wrote:
Wed Mar 21, 2018 1:55 pm
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Very cool photo Minnie !!! I'm sure your daughter in law will love this. No suggestions for improvements.
Dave
Thanks Dave, and I'll ask you too: should I crop up from the bottom?


Minnie, IMO you should leave the photo as is. I think any cropping would possibly eliminate the musicians from either side of the photo. The wiring on the floor and the amplifiers are part of the image and should remain as in your kitchen sink, so to speak. Although, you may have other intentions with this image.
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Post by minniev » Mon Apr 02, 2018 8:22 pm

St3v3M wrote:
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Wow, that's beautiful! Well done! S-
Thank you. I couldn't resist the lights in that sequence.
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Post by minniev » Mon Apr 02, 2018 8:22 pm

PietFrancke wrote:
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cool shot, I feel them move. I agree about the crop - don't do it, the wires and different color tiles add atmosphere and sense of environment. It works.
Thanks Piet, glad you liked it. I feel better about the wires once I saw what others had to say about them.
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