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Postby minniev » Sat Nov 04, 2017 5:22 pm

The inner workings of aspen bark is pretty intriguing, so I had to try. All comments, edits appreciated.
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Postby Matt Quinn » Sun Nov 05, 2017 12:46 am

minniev wrote:The inner workings of aspen bark is pretty intriguing, so I had to try. All comments, edits appreciated.


Minnie, I can't be more specific than to say the image looks flat to me. Don't know what to suggest. Matt
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Postby minniev » Sun Nov 05, 2017 4:05 pm

Matt Quinn wrote:
minniev wrote:The inner workings of aspen bark is pretty intriguing, so I had to try. All comments, edits appreciated.


Minnie, I can't be more specific than to say the image looks flat to me. Don't know what to suggest. Matt


I agree, and will continue to dabble in possible solutions.
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Postby LindaShorey » Sun Nov 05, 2017 6:33 pm

The center curl seems to not be in focus, which is a negative for me. I think the subject would be more appealing crisper throughout (thinking of the properties of the bark).
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Postby minniev » Sun Nov 05, 2017 10:29 pm

LindaShorey wrote:The center curl seems to not be in focus, which is a negative for me. I think the subject would be more appealing crisper throughout (thinking of the properties of the bark).


You're probably right. Thanks for looking.
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Postby St3v3M » Tue Nov 14, 2017 7:20 am

Step to the right about a foot and a half then turn left forty-five degrees and aim at that large peel.

The 'problem' with an image like this is that's it's all the same, sort of like taking an image of a grey board, where you need more contrast, the kind you see on the right side of the image where the bark is peeling. Some bark works straight on, but I would suggest a forty-five here to really bring the story to life.

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