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Bicycle

Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2018 2:59 am
by Psjunkie
Transportation, things, decided here, I dunno....good a place as any

Re: Bicycle

Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2018 10:17 pm
by LindaShorey
I wondered about cropping a bit from the left, seems like a stronger statement of repeating patterns and shapes. Maybe a little more drama with light and contrasts?

Re: Bicycle

Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2018 11:38 pm
by PietFrancke
real interesting - makes me wonder what type of place it is

Re: Bicycle

Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2018 1:06 pm
by Psjunkie
Well done Linda...I believe an improvement.

I forget Piet but I think a parking structure...

Re: Bicycle

Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2018 1:51 am
by minniev
I like the image, especially with Linda's crop to contain some of the massive stacks a bit so we don't lose the cake. The two intersecting lines with the bike at the crosspoint works as a compositional device.

Though I rarely have the inclination to do it, for some reason I immediately thought about converting it to monochrome while keeping/intensifying the color of the bike.

Re: Bicycle

Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2018 3:53 am
by Psjunkie
minniev wrote:
Mon Feb 19, 2018 1:51 am
Though I rarely have the inclination to do it, for some reason I immediately thought about converting it to monochrome while keeping/intensifying the color of the bike.
Have at it minniev...you know I absorb other's viewpoints.

Re: Bicycle

Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2018 3:43 pm
by davechinn
Psjunkie wrote:
Thu Feb 15, 2018 2:59 am
Transportation, things, decided here, I dunno....good a place as any
Frank I'm not much of a architecture sorta person, but I'll take a stab at it. I do like the leading line that the building provides for the subject. However, showing more of the walkway would have created another leading line, but not knowing what was beyond the area may have been your reasoning for not capturing that particular composition. Just my thoughts.
Dave

Re: Bicycle

Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2018 4:30 pm
by Psjunkie
I'm not either Mr. Chinn but take a stab myself every once in a while....thanks for looking and making comment.

Re: Bicycle

Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2018 6:45 am
by St3v3M
LindaShorey wrote:
Thu Feb 15, 2018 10:17 pm
I wondered about cropping a bit from the left, seems like a stronger statement of repeating patterns and shapes. Maybe a little more drama with light and contrasts?
What a difference a crop makes! This is an interesting image making me wonder what it is too. S-

Re: Bicycle

Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2018 2:59 pm
by Psjunkie
I believe a parking structure, thanks for stopping by St3v3m.