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Re: Industry

Postby St3v3M » Thu Nov 09, 2017 5:55 am

I'm really in love with this one and the processing you've added to it. What a difference there is with the haze removal in the jpg versus the raw too.

I was wondering what this might look like on glass then I read something you wrote and thought I'd try something. It wasn't needed, but I'm curious.

I wonder if you notice the change and if you like it? S-
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Postby LindaShorey » Thu Nov 09, 2017 3:00 pm

St3v3M wrote:I'm really in love with this one and the processing you've added to it. What a difference there is with the haze removal in the jpg versus the raw too.

I was wondering what this might look like on glass then I read something you wrote and thought I'd try something. It wasn't needed, but I'm curious.

I wonder if you notice the change and if you like it? S-


I see a bit more detail in shadows. Looks good, Steve, thanks! I didn't apply haze removal at any point, did you? :)
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Re: Industry

Postby Matt Quinn » Thu Nov 09, 2017 3:21 pm

LindaShorey wrote:Shot yesterday morning; the light is what caught my eye :) Minnie's industrial topic was also in my mind, however, so now I'm working out where I can best shoot this subject to contrast it against the pretty farming community in which it resides. Inspiration from fellow forum members, priceless!

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Linda,

"Two roads diverged..." When I saw the tracks diverge at the top of the image, I thought of Frost's poem. The tracks serve here as a superb metaphor for the two "cultures" of farming and industry, joining and separating, nature and the hand of man, putting in and taking out, sun piercing man-made clouds...on and on. Grandly done. For that reason, I appreciate seeing the two images, sooc, i.e., nature, and your edit, i.e., hand of woman. A marvelous meditation and a rich contemplation. Thank you. Matt
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Postby St3v3M » Thu Nov 09, 2017 3:40 pm

LindaShorey wrote:I see a bit more detail in shadows. Looks good, Steve, thanks! I didn't apply haze removal at any point, did you? :)

I was thinking about what you said about not working the Tone Curve and thought I'd give something I learned a try.
- Open the Tone Curve and grab the top-right White Point then drag it left or down
- Do the same with the bottom-left Black Point dragging along the edges to taste
- You are basically crushing and clipping the points giving it a different look

I like yours better but hope it helps! S-
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Re: Industry

Postby LindaShorey » Thu Nov 09, 2017 7:54 pm

Matt Quinn wrote:Linda,

"Two roads diverged..." When I saw the tracks diverge at the top of the image, I thought of Frost's poem. The tracks serve here as a superb metaphor for the two "cultures" of farming and industry, joining and separating, nature and the hand of man, putting in and taking out, sun piercing man-made clouds...on and on. Grandly done. For that reason, I appreciate seeing the two images, sooc, i.e., nature, and your edit, i.e., hand of woman. A marvelous meditation and a rich contemplation. Thank you. Matt


Thank you for your very lyrical and lovely commentary, Matt. Greatly appreciated!
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Re: Industry

Postby LindaShorey » Thu Nov 09, 2017 7:54 pm

St3v3M wrote:
LindaShorey wrote:I see a bit more detail in shadows. Looks good, Steve, thanks! I didn't apply haze removal at any point, did you? :)

I was thinking about what you said about not working the Tone Curve and thought I'd give something I learned a try.
- Open the Tone Curve and grab the top-right White Point then drag it left or down
- Do the same with the bottom-left Black Point dragging along the edges to taste
- You are basically crushing and clipping the points giving it a different look

I like yours better but hope it helps! S-



Thanks very much for the tip!
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Re: Industry

Postby St3v3M » Thu Nov 09, 2017 8:13 pm

LindaShorey wrote:Thanks very much for the tip!

Always! S-
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