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Toppers

Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2018 4:03 pm
by Psjunkie
another building......

Re: Toppers

Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2018 5:10 pm
by PietFrancke
it's ok, I like the clean and strong lines. But I feel it will be a while before I am astounded and amazed like I was with that last one!

Re: Toppers

Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2018 10:02 pm
by Psjunkie
thanks for the vote of confidence, if I had a pair of acorns I'd give you a piece of my mind..laughing.........your a hard man to please Piet.

Re: Toppers

Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2018 2:15 pm
by minniev
Psjunkie wrote:
Thu Oct 04, 2018 4:03 pm
another building......
This is good but not as exquisite as that other architectural one you posted. You've spoiled us. The angle is wonderful, again, you've got an eye for it so keep on working this stuff!

Here's a little critique from my perspective, though you realize I know little about architectural imagery. For me, the sky in the upper third is a bit too dark, and there are sky issues in the right 2/3 of the image that may be brushwork related or just processing with that particular kind of cloud. There's a little dark haloing here and there. I think if you back off the darks in darkest part of the sky and try to balance out the different portions, it will work better. Or go for broke, extract the building, and go with a black sky, or pop in a different sky. This particular sky may not be interesting enough to spend the time it takes to get all its varying parts situated.

Re: Toppers

Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2018 2:59 pm
by Psjunkie
Thank you minniev, couple of tough customers you and Piet.....I concur with your assessment

Re: Toppers

Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2018 2:40 am
by Psjunkie
So b/w may not always be best.......especially when lazily done...

Re: Toppers

Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2018 9:46 pm
by minniev
Psjunkie wrote:
Sat Oct 06, 2018 2:40 am
So b/w may not always be best.......especially when lazily done...
Color is nice too, and doesn’t have any of the halo challenges. Likes kind of like vintage film. But monochrome, if you can make it work in extreme, would be very cool.

Re: Toppers

Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2018 10:06 pm
by Psjunkie
thanks minniev, still playing but gonna let this one rest for a bit.....got a couple of pretty hard core critics with b/w version

Re: Toppers

Posted: Wed Jun 26, 2019 5:52 am
by St3v3Murray
I love how the clouds impact the image! Well done and keep exploring this type is imagery! S-