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A quirky shot of a foggy sunrise, trying to hold all the tones in without HDR. The colors were pastels, and delicate, so I didn't try to ramp them up. Suggestions and edits welcome.
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Well composed image minniev...I'm not sure I understand (holding all the tones in) I've been known to be a bit dense..

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Post by davechinn »

'Yesterday Morning' is a beautiful scene. Did you use a gradient filter with this image, Minnie?

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Psjunkie wrote:
Wed Dec 19, 2018 1:24 am
Well composed image minniev...I'm not sure I understand (holding all the tones in) I've been known to be a bit dense..
Thanks Frank. I wanted to keep the colors like they were, more in the pastel range, and still get a bit of definition in the clouds and reeds, but most ways to get definition also add contrast. When I did that, I lost the gentle transitions between yellows and oranges and it got close to banding. So I worked a bit on the top and bottom but left the middle alone.
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davechinn wrote:
Thu Dec 20, 2018 10:23 am
'Yesterday Morning' is a beautiful scene. Did you use a gradient filter with this image, Minnie?
Thanks Dave. Of course I didn't remember to take a filter. The morning didn't develop as I expected, either, I was expecting dense fog till mid-day and was headed to the swamp. When I saw the fog lifting and burning off so quickly, I took a detour to get what I could from it while it lasted.
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So something along these lines maybe??? I tried to boost the pastels but not change the luminance (light or darkness) of the image...
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Post by PietFrancke »

hey, only because in critique (meaning I really love this shot and the feeling of it). Straighten the horizon (the far shore looks like a horizon, even if it isn't). In the milky smoothness - roughly at the distance the reeds appear, the water seems a little hard - same with the most white cloud reflections. Soften/cloud that area up just a hair (or add a hint of ripples there) to get a little more depth into the scene.

This image is a wall hanger - spiritually and any other way you wish to measure it. Endless layered beauty.

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Post by Ernst-Ulrich Schafer »

Lovely image Minnie. I'd straighten that horizon also and consider a square crop.
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Psjunkie wrote:
Thu Dec 20, 2018 1:37 pm
So something along these lines maybe??? I tried to boost the pastels but not change the luminance (light or darkness) of the image...
Thanks Frank. You've figured out things in PS I am still learning!
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PietFrancke wrote:
Sun Dec 30, 2018 10:12 pm
hey, only because in critique (meaning I really love this shot and the feeling of it). Straighten the horizon (the far shore looks like a horizon, even if it isn't). In the milky smoothness - roughly at the distance the reeds appear, the water seems a little hard - same with the most white cloud reflections. Soften/cloud that area up just a hair (or add a hint of ripples there) to get a little more depth into the scene.

This image is a wall hanger - spiritually and any other way you wish to measure it. Endless layered beauty.
Thanks Piet. I will give it a whirl. I think my eyes are crooked, I have always had so much trouble with horizons.
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