You didn't have to re-edit. It was just an observation. I know this isn't the critique boards. But, yes, I like it much better. There's a sparkle there.
As for personalities, I agree that dogs are better than people. But even a bad dog is because of their owners and not because of the dog. My opinion.
I knew a retired police officer who took his K-9 with him upon retirement. He and his wife went out to dinner. When they came home they weren't greeted by their dog in his normal fashion so he told his wife to call for backup while he cleared the house. Long story short, he found a burglar up on his kitchen counter cornered by his very well trained K-9 Shepherd. The burglar was very happy to see the owner in order to call off the dog.
My dentist is a retired Marine with a very well trained German Shepherd. That dog would not go through specific doors in his office because they were off limits to animals. He was also very protective of the female staffers in his office. You could tell just by certain body actions when people were around. Awesome dog. Unfortunately he lost the dog in a house fire this past Christmas. He's still grieving.
Yeah, dogs are very special.