"Sometimes imagination is no more than randomness applied." —Piet Francke

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by Shine Gonzalvez
Tue Jun 09, 2015 2:54 pm
Forum: People Critique
Topic: He Gave Up His Life For Us
Replies: 4
Views: 490

He Gave Up His Life For Us

C&C welcome
by Shine Gonzalvez
Tue Jun 09, 2015 12:01 pm
Forum: People Critique
Topic: Empowered
Replies: 10
Views: 987

Re: Empowered

Overall I really enjoy this image. Probably because of the heavy illustration feel of it. However, like Tom said, there is something about the overall texture that seems a bit much. Here is my take on why. We have a preconceived notion of what children signify; purity, innocence, exploration, naive...
by Shine Gonzalvez
Wed Jun 03, 2015 12:09 pm
Forum: People Critique
Topic: Empowered
Replies: 10
Views: 987

Empowered

something different ....comments welcome
by Shine Gonzalvez
Fri May 01, 2015 10:29 pm
Forum: Animals Critique
Topic: Off to the Dentist
Replies: 2
Views: 388

Off to the Dentist

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by Shine Gonzalvez
Tue Apr 21, 2015 8:17 pm
Forum: Animals Critique
Topic: Dog
Replies: 3
Views: 491

Dog

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by Shine Gonzalvez
Thu Mar 19, 2015 6:37 pm
Forum: People Critique
Topic: The Irishmen
Replies: 13
Views: 1418

Re: The Irishmen

Personally I much prefer the editing of the beard on this one....
by Shine Gonzalvez
Thu Mar 19, 2015 6:33 pm
Forum: People Critique
Topic: Inside Outside
Replies: 10
Views: 1486

Re: Inside Outside

I order the cropped version myself ...it is less cluttered and focuses on contrasting lives on how these girls are spending the same moment in time.....the other shop signs for me didn't add much....for this reason I also like the separation by the pole straight down the centre....but as you rightly...
by Shine Gonzalvez
Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:47 pm
Forum: People Critique
Topic: Only 18...
Replies: 2
Views: 437

Re: Only 18...

TomCofer wrote:I like it Shine. Nice detail and color.

Thanks Tom .....using old material... It's so cold here.... Good for the homeless they must be keeping warm somewhere as no one is out and about....
by Shine Gonzalvez
Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:25 pm
Forum: People Critique
Topic: Only 18...
Replies: 2
Views: 437

Only 18...

C&C welcome
by Shine Gonzalvez
Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:23 pm
Forum: People Critique
Topic: Inside Outside
Replies: 10
Views: 1486

Re: Inside Outside

Well, Shine, now that you've mentioned the checkered pattern that's all I can see. :spank: But, you're right, they are somewhat distracting. I'm not sure cropping them out would benefit the overall story, but maybe toning them down some. I'm not a big fan of cloning distinguishing features from a s...